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Rainflowers (by Mikey and Tiersdin)
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Rainflowers (by Mikey and Tiersdin) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Carve a place mountainside, high above clouds, just below the sky. At the juncture's edge within a shadow's whim, the lips of rock portend hard rain comin' in. Break the earth, crumbling soft earth, giving birth to sighs... The fire raging just beyond the edge of hill still dry, a path for light to choke in hot flowers of smoke. Petals wilting soft pastels, honeysuckle sipped so sweet crushed by power of the heat. Turned to cinders flying free. Hard rain is comin'. Hard rain is comin'. Fill the drought, deep grey horizon give your bounty in harrowed cry Clap the sky to fill down glasses, glasses, glasses, glasses, glasses. This fire burns the chaparel and grasses, grasses, grasses. Let the thunder tear the throat of fire out, out. Come down, rain and steam the valley back to green and sprout. Hurricane thoughts invade this trail. Heavy cloud release your tears. Calm the desert storm within, cleanse our place in thunderous cheer. Carve a place mountainside, high above clouds, just below the sky. At the juncture's edge within a shadow's whim, the lips of rock portend hard rain comin' in. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like this a lot Cold hands means a warm heart |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
There's a hard rain gonna fall - Dylan Nice to see this pact of words. You two write with a single crayon ~Ed |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
You somehow manage to stay consistently good with all these written-together poems, guys. I could NEVER let someone feed off my mind so often. I's got tooooo many shields.  Then again, my brain's been going too dry for me recently. Grr. I HAVE picked up projects again, but I'm so busy on the visual, it's hard to create words without sight. So instead, I'm figurin' out how to be every band memeber from my own fictitious band for the end of October, where we're obligated to wear Halloween costumes at work. (This is SO much cooler than graveyard shift at a donut shop!) your tongue's like poison |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done you two! very closely knit and it showcases both of your talents in a grand way. I enjoyed! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done you two! Much enjoyed the blending of ink here... ~Hugs to you both~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This was so beautiful, it near brought me to "tiers" ! VERY well done! Kudos! ~ smiles to you both this fine fall morning ~ Linda |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks. Tier started in with mountains and I immediately subverted it to the massive brushfire in Southern California at the moment. It's hard to breathe!Anyway ... thank you all. And Lori? EVERY member? THIS I gotta see! Pwease?  |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Ok, so I'm a mountain kind of girl, sue me! *smiles* Thanks everyone for your thoughtful compliments. ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friends, this is beautiful and you make the rain fall gracefully in your words, this is a breathtaking vision, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Tiersdin and Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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