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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-09-25 08:35 PM


It May Be A Struggle
~By Sue~

I gave you all I had to give
Never was it enough for you
Now I have nothing left to give
There is nothing else I can do

Now I am focusing on myself
All of the things I want to do
The plans I have made now
To make my life brand new

I know it may be a struggle
But this never bothered me
A life I have always wanted
I am going to get you see

With flowers growing in my yard
A birdfeeder hanging from a tree
A birdhouse for the birds to live in
Singing their sweet songs to me

8-12-02



© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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1 posted 2002-09-25 08:40 PM


I like this poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Miah
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since 2002-08-26
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2 posted 2002-09-25 09:08 PM


Oh, this is lovely.  Cheers to you.  


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3 posted 2002-09-25 09:11 PM




(smiles) Yes, always build birdhouses in your soul and always let the canaries of hope fill your heart and believe tomorrow happiness will come that I just know will come true for you! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Paddy
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Straya
4 posted 2002-09-26 11:41 AM


haha Delightful. You tell him SmartSue. Anyone who enjoys birdsong is on my side.


I guess one becomes content with one’s poetry when one opens the book ten years hence and does NOT exclaim, “Did I really write this?”

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