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iluvhellokitty21
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since 2002-09-24
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0 posted 2002-09-25 04:12 PM



Listening to the dead phone line I sit in complete silence
All except the beeping that tells me you aren't there

Pain that is unbareable overtakes me and tears spring from my eyes

My heart bleeds because you aren't here

Minutes without you are as hours

Hours spent in pain and torment

Spent longing for you and your touch

Longing to be near to you to be intwined with you

To be so close I can't seperate my body from yours

Laying with you for hours doing nothing except listening to the beating of your heart

I ache for you, for the feeling of my hands in your hair

My fingers locked with yours

Your arms around me

So don't go so quick

Linger with me

Stay, just don't go



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Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
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1 posted 2002-09-25 04:15 PM


Nice one! I like the intimacy created in this piece!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-09-25 04:25 PM


Nice

Cold hands means a warm heart

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