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Pastel Caesuras
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(For my love dove Joanna!  ) Pastel Caesuras By: Noah Eaton 10/2/02 Once I was a dove glowing in navy blue Staring into a silent lake, sad and forlorn Hearing ducks quack sadly, hugging me Believing that I truly am special and no longer will I mourn Then gracefully, floating like a feather in the wind A beautiful lady dove descended to me with a sunflower in her beak Crooning and chirping with a cheery girl-scout smile Dropping it at my feet and leaping in happy dance tossing her wings Suddenly my blues bleached to whites, plumage burning like white dwarves Chirping back to her happily, singing Shangri-La feedback to her Glissading to me throwing a standing ovation, folding me in her wings Smothering my buttermilk face in babys breath smooches in soft colors Through ornithologic grammar she says, "My name is Joanna, God sent me to be the dove of your soul, as I will always love you!" And the doves in our hearts nests merge, feathers bleeding pink Blushing in pastel caesuras, coloring our world through every gentle touch of loves youth And me and her have found a nest on a tropical lake Two white doves now blushing pink in loves ecstasy Cooing sweet love songs to each other Marking enjambments on a never-ending romantic symphony... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-03-2002 10:51 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Noah, your love shines bright here, you are such a sweet guy!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very romantic...very pretty Noah. I'm sure Joanna will love it! ~hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
This is sweet Noah. Mushy stuff, what woman wouldn't love it. Tom |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
"And the doves in our hearts nests merge, feathers bleeding pink Blushing in pastel caesuras, coloring our world through every gentle touch of loves youth" Pink! the colour of love ~ beautiful Noah....Joanna, will adore this! Sammie ^i^ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'... me and her have found a nest on a tropical lake...' Noah, so much I would love to see you and your Joanna build that nest. The picture is perfect for your words. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Noah you never cease to amaze me with your ever growing gift of words. Your lovely words are magical! Deb |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Neverending Noah I think your statment of love is that a eternal romance what we all need and want I enjoyed this writing very much Thomas |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah, Noah, Noah!!! This is without a doubt one of the sweetest, purest, imaginative love poems of yours that I have ever read---and that says a lot! There is something extra special about this one that really appeals to me. Thank you! ~ May all your days and nights be filled with this kind of pure love ~ Linda |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
So very happy to see YOU happy again - I recall a poem a while back when you were sad about this same lady. Peace, Cor |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - you just shine when you write about Joanna... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Your love shines in every word, in every line.....may it always brighten your days (((warm hugs))) Charisma |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Noah...this is sooooo beautiful. Being the romantic that I am, these are my favorite kinds of poetry. You and Joanna are fortunate to be so happy and in love. True love is simply amazing, isn't it? I know!!! Best wishes to both of you. Ethel.......garysgirl |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
It's always such a pleasure to read your poetry Noah, especially a poem like this, when love shines through every word. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very lovely Noah. Soft to read. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Beautiful poem.A challenge to my vocabulary.I read with dictionary in hand and awe in my heart. paladin |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sweet as usual Noah Cold hands means a warm heart |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
And me and her have found a nest on a tropical lake Two white doves now blushing pink in loves ecstasy Cooing sweet love songs to each other Marking enjambments on a never-ending romantic symphony... Enjoyed this Noah, very tender. El riesgo vive siempre! |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
awwwwwwww, so sweet |
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