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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2002-09-25 06:42 AM


you think that I am
rabidly insane
as I let out squeals
in speechless whispers
torn, pleading, begging,
in arrested form --
a stone, fixed at place
to weather distress

but, one day am sure
that the time will come
when an artist’s hands
shall chisel and sculpt
and carve out of me
something beautiful
a great bright future
and till that day dawns
I must suffer storms
in forced vertigo

I hope the day comes
sooner than it must
for then I shall be
alive and hammered

© Copyright 2002 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
RSWells
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since 2001-06-17
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1 posted 2002-09-25 12:39 PM


I hope the day comes soon for us that the inner artist recognizes what has always been the form under the surface and we are thus raised from the dust to a lit place of exaltation. In the meantime I too get hammered (but hopefully not arrested).
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-09-25 12:59 PM


This so reminds me of my boyfriend LIam. LOL Good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-09-25 01:10 PM


Sudhir  
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

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4 posted 2002-09-25 02:19 PM




(smiles) This day will come for you, sweet friend, just as you truly are an artist and wonderful friend to us all that is inspirational and special to us all! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Dee
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5 posted 2002-09-25 08:58 PM


Sudhir, I see something wonderful in all that you write. You don't need someone else to carve out something beautiful from you.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

Sunshine
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6 posted 2002-09-25 09:46 PM



Dang but the visions are
intoxicating and I am dizzy!

Sudhir Iyer
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
7 posted 2002-09-26 12:11 PM


Thank you all so very much....

Regards,
Sudhir

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