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Lightning Storm |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Lightning Storm By: Noah Eaton 9/24/02 Bolt from the blue hit my mind Parallel volcanoes quake upon this lonely futon This electrostatic heart bleeds once more The sun is sandwiched between Thor's gong Your sighs make my heart tremble Your lava breath lovingly fondles Your sighs make my heart tremble Inside my dreams Every day it seems Glaciers shatter in my yearning heartbeat Take my hand Take me as I am We'll draw a rainbow when we meet... Evanescent sirens screech With coronas that burn like embers of the fire Standing there like flagman at a railroad crossing Amplifying these monochromatic desires You swath like a beacon in a lighthouse You're burning up the coals of the skies Blood red skies stained like Hawaiian punch Graupel tears that shatter windows and streetlights Ice pierces the earth like stalactites Every time you lovingly sigh Stained-glass smooches through the night Inside my dreams Every day it seems Glaciers shatter in my yearning heartbeat Take my hand Take me as I am We'll draw a rainbow when we meet... I heard your whisper through a satellite Through a UHF Television Signal Turning on and off like a gaslight You're speaking to me in metronomes Red sprites are playing hide and seek It's such unbearable heat This thunder gives my lungs migraine Anvils are falling endlessly Maybe this storm Will soon fall asleep... Inside my dreams Every day it seems Glaciers shatter in my yearning heartbeat Take my hand Take me as I am We'll draw a rainbow when we meet... Inside my dreams Every day it seems Hurricanes spread spider lightning through my arteries Put your arms around me Kiss me baby Through this storm of lightning... Dream on, my love Dream on, my love Dream on, my love Soon we'll be together... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-25-2002 08:50 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Noah  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Glaciers shatter in my yearning heartbeat Amazingly powerful line, Noah! I like...okay, I love the romanticism in your work!  Kris Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
this is wonderful, really enjoyed it. |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
woooooow what a great thoughts...I love your poems.. I like this piece.. Inside my dreams Every day it seems Glaciers shatter in my yearning heartbeat Take my hand Take me as I am We'll draw a rainbow when we meet Also that... Put your arms around me Kiss me baby Through this storm of lightning... Dream on, my love Dream on, my love Dream on, my love Soon we'll be together... I really love it... Looking as always to read from u ... Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) [This message has been edited by secretlife (09-25-2002 02:18 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah, words cannot express how much I enjoyed this poem and my growing respect for your talent. Your work is awesome and you are awesome! Luvya Linda |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Noah, no one can write about a dream and a storm better than you. This is exceptional my friend. Hugs and luvs, Marti Every now and then take a good look at something not made |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Noah, you always amaze me with your words. You paint some beautiful pictures. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
wow, beautifully haunting, love it! SS |
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BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA |
Noah, one word: electrifying! *~*~*~*~ |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Noah, The fact that I love lightning, (as long as I am inside since I've proven to be a good conductor  )makes this piece that much better to me! Wonderful work m'friend ~Sheri "Don't wait for your ship to come in ... Swim out to it" [This message has been edited by Irie (09-26-2002 05:25 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful Noah, and awesome pic!! hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
one of your best poems my dear friend liked it |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
Noah...... Wonderful work my dear friend. many blessings always Eno Words are my medicine. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Fantastic, Noah. I love the repeated line "Take me as I am" Sandra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - I believe you're in love, no, I know that you are my friend... BC |
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