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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-24 10:04 PM



Beyond the thickened walls I place
not to protect, but to erase.
I live with saddened heart of pain.
Yet still I long for love again.

Cursed with feelings running deep
and in the midst of morbid weep,
I yearn for love to crash the gate.
This dark desire then to sate.

I know the wall a bit too strong.
Perchance it blocks a lovers song
I'm ever close with hearkened ear,
listening soft, for love to hear.

WhiteRose

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-09-24 10:17 PM


Very Good Write

Cold hands means a warm heart

CocoBaci
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2 posted 2002-09-24 10:24 PM


I've taken a liking to reading your writing PoetFriendWR...
And I thank you, for yet another 'touching' read that you've provided me2nite...
Smiles2u...
*~coco~*

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3 posted 2002-09-24 11:44 PM




(smiles) Oh Anne, this is wonderful, sweet friend, and may love answer back to you through the walls and into your heart, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-09-25 01:37 PM


and in the midst of morbid weep...

I love that line. I thought it was going to be about something else because of the title, but I was pleasantly surprised again at your work.

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