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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-09-24 06:33 PM


I thought I would never find love
But I was on the search
I wanted to reach
Out to somebody
In time

I looked deep within to find the strength,
but nothing could I find.

But I knew I must find
That strength in my mind
Or lonely I shall forever be

Always thinking,
asking the same question:
"Who would ever love me?"

But after a long time
Of searching
I think I finally found the one
I just hope that she likes me
in the same way

Hopefully my luck holds out,
hopefully she'll be mine.
Maybe this will be my time,
my first lucky day.

She is the only thing
That makes me happy
Sometimes she even makes me feel sappy
I love her with all my being

What is this feeling?
I feel new strength!
Why is it only her I'm seeing?

It is like
Everything has changed
I have changed
I know not
these new feelings I feel

How can I know my power?
This feeling in my heart is new.
How do I know this is real?

But it feels real
I don't know what to feel
I love her
and I can't bare to lose her

I know if I had to pick from everything good,
I'd easily want to chose her.

For I know she shall forever be
the love of my life

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
1 posted 2002-09-24 06:35 PM


This one is one of our best.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-09-24 06:36 PM


I think so too Liam. Thanks for writing with me.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Miah
Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
3 posted 2002-09-24 06:46 PM


Very sweet.  enjoyed it
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-09-24 09:02 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this brought a tear to my eye, I am so happy for you both and wish you the greatest happiness together!!! (BIG GROUP HUG) May love always fill both your hearts as one, sweet friend, God Bless You Both, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Liam and Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you both!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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