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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-09-24 05:50 PM


Seeing Us Apart

They say you have to be able to see
yourself with someone before you
can come together as one.
At one time I did clearly
see myself with you.
I imagined us together and
I believed it to be true.
But now that we're together
and the way your treating me
I'm losing my vision and I'm not
so sure of the picture that I see.
I feel the thoughts changing
deep inside my heart.
I'm afraid when my vision clears
instead of seeing us together
I'll be seeing us apart.

JamesLee
Sept22
2002

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (09-24-2002 05:51 PM).]

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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2002-09-24 06:11 PM


Oh James

This was so sad but such a common feeling for so many.  Sometimes it takes a while before a person's true colors are revealed.  I hope this wasn't written about you and if it was I'm sure true love and happiness waits for you.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Miah
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2002-09-24 06:25 PM


aww this was sad.  Sometimes that happens.  You can't see someone for who they truly are till you been with them for awhile.  
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3 posted 2002-09-24 08:55 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh James, I too hope this isn't really happening to you right now, this feeling is an ever common one and I wish for true love to always fill your deserving heart, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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