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Justin D. Skize
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since 2002-09-23
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0 posted 2002-09-24 02:33 AM



Justin Spired

Justin kace you're wondering
and justin kace you care
I'm miserable - I'm justin pain
It's more than I can bear

I've tried to ease the aching
but it's here, deep in my heart
'cuz I'm justin fatuated
and I have been from the start

If you knew him, you'd understand
yes Justin is his name
It's justin conceivable that he
could love me just the same

A love like his can justin spire
a song from poet's pen
I'm justin toxicated
when I think of him again

It's justin tolerable
when we have to be apart
His absence drives me justin sayne
He's such a work of art

Our love for one another
began justin thyme to save me
From a life justin appropriate
he cleared all the debris

But...

He was justin considerate
and treated me so poorly
It was justin describable
I trusted prematurely

He was justin consistant
though his love was justin flux
Now I'm justin ebriated
because once again life sucks

A poet justin continent-
a constant flow of words
He'd woo me justin rhyme and verse-
justin uendo...for the birds

Could it be justin security
that keeps me justin limbo
Perhaps I'm justin fear of hurt-
Hmmmm..I don't think so, no

So, now I sit justin despair
for Justin hurt me deeply
You ask, 'Will you find love again?'
I answer, 'justin deedy'.

-Justin D. Skize-

[This message has been edited by Justin D. Skize (09-24-2002 02:41 AM).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-09-24 02:47 AM


Perhaps it's Justin U. Endow?
and maybe it's Justin Jest?
Justin Just Circumstance?
or Justin Jest Amess?

Anyway I look at it
I like the justice there implied...
and even if Justin Attempt?
perhaps it was Justin Thyme...


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2002-09-24 06:59 AM



Another Justin, disguised
now who would'a ever thought
that all the Justins' mommies
would, from a hat they bought
pick this kind of name from within
that silly little hat
to produce all of these Justins,
now who'da imagined that!

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Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-24 08:03 AM




(smiles) Yay!!! Let's just say we're all justin ecstasy seeing your wonderful words light these pages, I LOVE IT, this is a clever and gorgeous debut!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Justin, may you be inspired by us all as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Justin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

secretlife
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4 posted 2002-09-24 08:14 AM


He's such a work of art

I love this piece. I love your written. It has a very strong meaning..

Looking to read more..

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-09-24 09:14 AM


Very nicely penned Justin!
Welcome to Passions...
I'm sure you will love it here.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Krishankins
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6 posted 2002-09-24 10:11 AM


Nice first post! Very clever!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

LRbaba
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since 2002-05-07
Posts 30
Dallas, Texas,
7 posted 2002-09-24 10:30 AM


you might think you are invisible

but this is justin oldjoke
and really justin sipid

Justin Kace
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since 1999-09-13
Posts 82
Oz
8 posted 2002-09-24 11:59 AM


I stopped by Passions Justin Kace,
And then I found you here...
Another Justin in this place
We've got enough I fear.

What will I say to Justin Thyme
When he gets wind of this?
He'll have to pen another rhyme
To toss in the abyss...

He's likely Justin Tolerant,
Inebriated too.
His verses tongue in cheek are meant
For Justins such as you.

He's busy now, he's Justin Luv
And he's had Justine Uff
A lightning rod came from above
And showed him the right stuff

So be forewarned Justin D. Skize
This place is Justin Sayne
Do take these words meant for the wise
We Justins tax the brain!!

Justin Sayne
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 53

9 posted 2002-09-24 08:09 PM


I see you but I'm Justin Sayne
I don't believe my eyes.
One more to add to Wizard's bane,
My bro Justin D. Skize.

'Bout time that you are Justin Spired.
There's much we have to do.
No more excuses that you're tired.
It's up and off with you.

It's boring here Justin Stitute
But now we've got it planned
We'll see how many give a hoot
If they should all be banned.

They know my face, Justin D Skize,
You'll have to do the deed.
A huge eraser somewhere lies
Step out and take the lead.

We'll gather up these poeteers,
Expunging every name.
Then juxtapose them with their peers,
But keep me Justin Sayne.

Then we will chuckle as they write
Justin Coherently
And we can Justin Joy the night
Justin D Skize and me...

Midnitesun
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Gaia
10 posted 2002-09-24 08:41 PM


LOL at this, it is just.....well, insanely funny. And still some will ask, "What's in a name?"
Enjoyable thread.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
11 posted 2002-09-24 08:57 PM


Justin D. Skize - now justin case I was a wondering about something...

BC

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