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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2002-09-24 01:09 AM

Take the pieces of me
tempered in the limelight
where I might fall gracefully
blazing in bronze~

Lay me down upon the horizon
sinking in the mystery
gazing across the sea
arching over the edge~

Holding up today
that colors our tomorrow's
come to me beseechingly
bending over my bow~

Cascading beneath a flaxen sun
cease me in the moment
blending with your reverie
and the sweetness of my sorrow~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (09-24-2002 02:38 AM).]

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-09-24 01:20 AM

I like this one B.S.! i like the new pic too! Very nice!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2002-09-24 01:42 AM

Who you calling B.S.? Hmmmm??? I'm kidding, and thank you for reading Kris, it's nice to see you here.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2002-09-24 02:47 AM

Lori,
Thought this belonged in adult!

But I was wrong...again.

As always an excellent write and it is so nice to see you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

4 posted 2002-09-24 08:12 AM

Be they of your essence, all the pieces that I hold
The love of heart, the truth of act, the grace of sincerity
Do the souls of many like you, join together to all see?
The blending of all colours and the joy of unity

BluesSerenade, I enjoyed the read, the first time I have had the pleasure.

Sincerely
Rick

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2002-09-24 08:13 AM

Blues... an excellent piece... one I truly enjoyed

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2002-09-24 04:21 PM

Larry~ Thank you for always leaving your kind words for me. They are truly appreciated more than you know.

Rick~ What a lovely and heartwarming reply.
Thank you very very much.

Ron~ I'm grateful for the friendship that you share~ and I thank you for reaching me the way you do.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-09-24 05:02 PM

Perfectly done, Lori...

~ loving hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-09-24 09:06 PM

BluesSerenade - nice write, as nice as the photo with that pretty smile...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-09-24 09:12 PM

(smiles) Oh Lori, this is beautiful, sweet friend, such soft emotion and genleness fills your words, may his reverie turn your tears into those of joy, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

10 posted 2002-09-25 08:47 PM

Lori, as usual, your words seem close to my heart. It is so odd.
Loved the poem, especially.....

Cascading beneath a flaxen sun
cease me in the moment
blending with your reverie
and the sweetness of my sorrow~

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

11 posted 2002-09-25 11:42 PM

I have the fear that if I bent to far I may fall ...
but a beautiful time to do it!!

Loved the journey!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2002-09-26 02:26 AM

Lyra~ Thank you,  and I hope you had the best of times in Tampa~
I knew you would make it~~~
lucky for them.

BC~  That was nice of you, and thanks for reading.

Noah~ Joy is a never ending reign that comes in all forms,
it's more a question of holding up~
........Hugs~

Hi Dee~  It is odd but I feel it too~
great minds think alike,
now where have I heard that before?

It's good to see you and thanks~

Craig~ the combination is a relentless one,
when trying to paint a rainbow~
Thank you lots~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (09-26-2002 02:56 AM).]

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