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Ousiders Cattermole
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since 2001-11-02
Posts 27


0 posted 2002-09-23 07:06 PM


It always seems that in my dreams
of dappl'd hues and griev's sighs;

And hither I lye, 'neath the rye
with guild'd lips and soot for wine.

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Miah
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2002-09-23 08:11 PM


lovely.  I really liked this line.  

"with guild'd lips and soot for wine"

thanks for sharing.  

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-09-23 11:37 PM


Wonderfully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
Posts 972
Texas
3 posted 2002-09-23 11:51 PM


I agree with Miah, that line was WAY cool!!!
I like the short ones the most!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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