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CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-09-23 01:56 PM

golden, dead leaves fall
in the autumn of my life
dreams passing away

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2002-09-23 03:40 PM

Very nice. Thanks for sharing.

han_tigger
Member

since 2002-08-10

Posts 50
Thundersley, Essex, Uk

2 posted 2002-09-23 03:46 PM

This poem with the single metaphor and image works really well, it concentrates the idea and conveys your feelings, but remember dreams are never lost, just sometimes a little hidden from view.
My poetry website is: http://www.geocities.com/han_tigger/HannahInglis.html
Hannah.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2002-09-23 04:33 PM

The autumn of our lives can also be the most colourful and productive time too!! It's up to us. Lovely write. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-09-23 04:35 PM

I love these writes about autumn. Enjoyed

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-09-23 04:49 PM

Beautiful write Cher...
Melancholy thoughts here..
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-09-23 08:46 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Cheryl, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and I hope everything is alright! ((sends angel hugs)) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2002-09-23 09:17 PM

enjoy

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

8 posted 2002-09-23 11:01 PM

Thanks to all for reading and comments. I assure you i am fine, but also aware that certain of my dreams won't be realized..of course there are others that shall be..absolutely!!
It was not meant as depressing,but as "changes" and I ain't winter yet baby!LOL

I appreciate all of you and am quite surprided at the reactions this tiny lil' guy brought...
Okay now to go turn over a new leaf

Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2002-09-24 12:25 PM

Delicate leaves of words.

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