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Open Poetry #22

Leaving

Fuji
Junior Member

since 2002-09-23

Posts 26

0 posted 2002-09-23 12:32 PM

As I pack and prepare to go,
I feel how much I'll miss her so.
I start to reflect with my depart.
With thoughts of her filling my heart.
It's in my heart I feel a burn.
Will I find her on my return?
Will my eyes fall upon her face,
When I return to this place?
Should I turn for one last look?
Because this may be the last chapter of our book.

[This message has been edited by Fuji (09-23-2002 01:53 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-23 12:35 PM

Cool poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

2 posted 2002-09-23 12:40 PM

This reminds me of going on deployments. You just never know. Enjoyed this one!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2002-09-23 01:15 PM

Fuji - This is a tender poem. Leaving is always difficult - returning can be too. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Fuji
Junior Member

since 2002-09-23

Posts 26

4 posted 2002-09-23 07:31 PM

Thank you Nightshade. Your right returning can be just as hard.

Fuji
Junior Member

since 2002-09-23

Posts 26

5 posted 2002-09-23 07:33 PM

I know I was in the Airforce, but I never made the connection til I read your post thanks for adding more insight to my own words. Thanks Krishankins.

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