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Radrook
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since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

0 posted 2002-09-23 01:48 AM

Two skylines
shimmered loud

as
proud mountains majesties
heraldries of past forevers to last.

as
skies of spacious
plains of rolling
nourishing  rains.

as
seas betweened,
evergladed by
swayings of grain.

as
brotherhoods of
understoods
pondered long
forever strong
as
Septembered eyes foundered,
wondered and
cried.

two skylines
shimmered  proud.

[This message has been edited by Radrook (09-23-2002 01:24 PM).]

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-09-23 07:30 AM

Beautifully descriptive Radrook ... a lovely view you've painted here. Very much enjoyed the imagery within this piece.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-09-23 07:45 AM

Radrook
Good palatte, enjoyed the read.

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-09-23 10:09 AM

I like how descriptive it is. Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-23 11:13 AM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Radrook, this is so powerfully touching, sweet friend, my heart still always grieves to that day but also we have become closer to Him and He shall always shine His grace on us all! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Radrook, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

5 posted 2002-09-23 11:16 AM

I love the way this flows alaong. Nicely written!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-09-23 01:20 PM

Awesome! Extremely well done,
and I love the presentation!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2002-09-23 01:25 PM

Awesome write - enjoyed thoroughly. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

8 posted 2002-09-23 01:52 PM

as
brotherhoods of
understoods
pondered long
forever strong
as
Septembered eyes foundered,
wondered and
cried.

Written with grace and understanding.

Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood
L cohen

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

9 posted 2002-09-24 05:55 AM

Thank you all for your encouraging responses.
God bless!

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