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Open Poetry #22

Color Keyed Sonata

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-23 12:39 PM

Color Keyed Sonata

walking under
a hammock of limbs
I become a tourist
in the trees
wind became
a piano’s breath
with leaves
playing tender keys
heaven bends
to kiss this place
sunlight peeks
between shadowed notes
melody of
mossy smells pour
perfect blend
of earth and air floats
melting music
gently turns to sight
new invented colored leaves
set the tone
nature dances freely
in pure sound
tranquility now rescued
in all here shown

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-09-23 12:48 PM

sunlight peeks
'between shadowed notes
melody of
mossy smells pour
perfect blend
of earth and air floats
melting music
gently turns to sight
new invented colored leaves
set the tone'
The whole poem is gorgeous! but this is my favorite part.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2002-09-23 07:17 AM

So many colors will be here soon,
Perhaps I’ll go walking with the moon
Out all in the shedding trees
Dancing to wind melodies
At least within thoughts of dance
Maybe to glimpse the soft romance.
Autumn slips upon us with song
Enjoy it now for winter will be along.

Gloom

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-09-23 10:06 AM

This is just a beautiful poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

4 posted 2002-09-23 11:11 AM

Hey stranger!! I see you still have your soft touch with words!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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