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Tommysgirl03
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since 2002-09-21
Posts 35


0 posted 2002-09-22 11:45 PM


I can attempt to help you,
in the areas that you will allow.

I can attempt to love you,
Only if you wish to be loved.

I can tell you that I wish
to help you...so let me
it's free of charge.

I can tell you that I
wish to love you...
when the time is right
for you and I.

I am always here for
you, and it's not by
chance...
The Man upstairs...
He knows his plan.


Angelia
3/22/01
Written especially for:
Mr.Tommy Harden



© Copyright 2002 Tommysgirl03 - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-22 11:46 PM


Good write

Cold hands means a warm heart

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155
Fraggle Rock
2 posted 2002-09-23 12:07 PM


Very sweet..touching...Reminds me of someone..thanks for sharing..

Consider yourself fuzzed

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
3 posted 2002-09-23 04:42 PM


This nearly made me break down into tears. I have a very dear friend, who holds everyone at arm's length. I have sent him the link to read this.

Thank you, thank you...Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
4 posted 2002-09-23 08:52 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet Angelia, you truly are an angel and I know your dad and so many others will always be blessed by the love you share and will always love you too as He loves all! (sigh) This is beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Angelia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2002-09-24 06:20 PM


Very nice...James
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