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The ending of You
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The ending of You |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania 
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The ending of you 5 o’clock came and 6 o’clock too finally at seven I put away the stew I cleaned up the kitchen and turned off the lights I went to my room and started to write. I poured out my heart this feverish trend, Oh how can I tell you my lover my friend. There’s so many things I needed to say, If only you would listen and not turn away I cried and I cried long into the night , finally sleep let me forget this plight Late morning came when I heard your car, I ran down the stairs out into the hall I opened my arms wanting you there but you went to the kitchen and looked for some beer I thought It was me, that your love went away My hair ? My face? What is it I say? I wanted to walk down by that one tree, where you carved my name for everyone to see Things where different then, we were full of life It wasn’t long after I became your wife As days went by and years passed on, this feeling I had went on and on. You turned me away more often then not, and things got to be were we fought and fought It was December, a cold winter‘s eve, I handed you papers and started to leave You said what is wrong? What’s the meaning of this? I started to shout shaking my fist, And then I remembered I had a wish! To stand on my feet and make my own niche Never surrendering life so rich! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very sad, Miah... but it sounds like you did the right thing... At least you turned it into a lovely poem... and I hope things are working out for you.  ~ loving hugsLyra |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Miah, I am so sorry. This must not have been easy for you. I hope your life is better now. Hugs, Marti Every now and then take a good look at something not made |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Miah, I know how hard it must have been for you to do this but I know it is only for the better and soon everything will be better again! (big hugggsssss) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much!n You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Miah, hank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Madame Chipmunk, Thank you for your kind words, It was hard at the time, but time  seems to heal all wounds. NewEnglandlazurlu, Thank you so much for replying. My life is better now, I have a wonderful person with me who is my dream come true.  Mistletoe Angel, I just want to say what a lovely heart you have. With that aside thank you so much for you kind words, they mean a great deal. [This message has been edited by Miah (09-22-2002 10:30 PM).] |
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