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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-22 08:57 PM


Save me the smallest portion
of your forgiveness,
it will be enough
to cover all my sins.

And after the smallest.

Now spread out the canopy.
Let me sit beneath
in shade of leaf,
separated from the scorch
of heat.
Warm only unto comfort
and let me forget
the need of this.

WhiteRose




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1 posted 2002-09-22 09:03 PM




(sigh) Oh Anne, I love the feel of this, sometimes we just need little of it so there can be much leftover, this is wonderfully touching, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-09-22 10:31 PM


I like it

Cold hands means a warm heart

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