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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Today it rained and no one felt, the splash of wet upon their face. No sound of rumble, no flash of light, nor torrents coursing in headlong race. No pavement wet, no puddles splashed, upon the ground of damp no trace. Today it rained and no one knew, that is except, for me and you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...me and you... sometimes we have to look closely to see the damp... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How well said... A sad expression set in mist...ThisDiamond |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tim, It happens, enjoyed the write. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Tim, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I wish for the sun to come and shine in your heart, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Tim, Romantic and highly suspicious of the observing capabilities of others. Then again, in the flush of love, it's only two that matters (for a while). Mike |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Tim - wonderful write - enjoyed. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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