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one part harmony (senryu)
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one part harmony (senryu) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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One part harmony Suspended love, solo notes Heart beats, no refrain |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
lovely!  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
In chorus, serendipity paired Hearts beat two, perfect pitch Duet |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Julie, thanks dear girl. Miah, thanks, and I love that rose! Duncan, how cool!  I love that word, serendipity. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, I thought one part was melody and two parts were harmony. But you know so much more about music than I!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so cute, Kacy... I can never write the short ones well... I guess thats because I'm such a chatterbox... but you did a beautiful job.  ~ hugs and grinsLyra |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this seems sad to me, but no one else seems to see that...to be alone, how can one create harmony alone? Yet, I would say it's extremely well-written, I guess it just feels different to me than to the others. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Larry, yes and no. Lyra, thanks, lady chatter. Virginia, yes, solos can be quite lonely. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
arpeggios dance sonatinas glissade soft in a skipped heartbeat  (smiles) I love this, sweet friend, you always bring such versatile poetic beauty to us all, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Noah, your's is really good! And thank you for your kind reply. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent... Compact and bright like sun! ThisDiamond |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was really lovely Kacy. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Much enjoyed this one tonight. All writing comes |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Diamond, Sue, Lone Wolf, thank you very much for your time and replies. I am glad you enjoyed this one. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Simply splendid !! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Harmonic hugs to you, Chris, sweet melodious Nightengale. |
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