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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-09-21 10:57 PM


(This is for my love Joanna, who I love with all my heart and is the angel of my life! I love you my love!



Two Angels Missing From Heaven
By: Noah Eaton
9/21/02

You are an angel missing from heaven
You say I am too
I knew I loved you when I first knew you
Crying in joy as I'm held close to you

I heard your whispers through the grapevine
Heard your soft siren sighs through the zephyr
Dolphins cry when you let the wind move you
And make my heart spin like a propeller

I'm a somnambulist for your love
Every night I swear I could surf a comets tail
Work my way through Andromeda's pipeline
Hang eight and fall into your loving arms, into your heart I sail

Every day I dream we're holding each other
Feeling your sweet first kiss, whining like happy puppies
Showering me in lipstick, sharing young love together at first sight
Resting together in a cradle of innocent romance happily

You are an angel missing from heaven
A sweet angel named Joanna
We're two angels missing from heaven
Wedded together in earthly matrimony and heavenly euphoria...





"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-21-2002 10:59 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-09-21 11:09 PM


This is so beautiful Noah.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Miah
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2 posted 2002-09-21 11:36 PM


this is so lovely.  sigh.  beautiful just beautiful.


ThunderMage
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3 posted 2002-09-21 11:37 PM


This is awesome.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-09-22 12:04 PM


This is just gorgeous, Noah...
You are unbelievable...
~ loving hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Neeraja
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5 posted 2002-09-22 08:33 AM


What a sweet... beautiful poem Noah!

  

Neeraja

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6 posted 2002-09-22 10:22 AM


sweet very sweet

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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7 posted 2002-09-22 10:24 AM


Just beautiful Noah, my dear friend. The picture is precious as well. hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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8 posted 2002-09-22 03:13 PM


this is beautiful, Joanna will love it!

SS

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9 posted 2002-09-22 03:18 PM


Every night I swear I could surf a comets tail

This line really hit me, it evokes vivid pictures and emotions. I envy the love you two share.

Ems x-x-x

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10 posted 2002-09-22 04:11 PM


Wonderful as always sweet sidekick!
You tell that Joanna to get back in here okay?
~Luv and hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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11 posted 2002-09-22 06:37 PM


Soooooo sweet, Noah!
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12 posted 2002-09-22 07:54 PM


Noah,  the love and affection for your Joanna just oozes out of these blue pages.

This just pulls at my heartstrings...

Hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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13 posted 2002-09-22 08:34 PM


Just FABulous!!!! Heartfelt..she is ever so lucky to have you in her life!! Amazing stuff here,Mistletoe  

Consider yourself fuzzed

Bill Charles
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14 posted 2002-09-22 08:52 PM


Noah - this is one of your best poems I have read. Tender is your heart for your Joanna...

BC

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15 posted 2002-09-22 11:22 PM


Very nice Noah...James
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