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haikus for Her ------ repost from open 21
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haikus for Her ------ repost from open 21 |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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a remarkable woman She guards the kernel buffeted by hateful wind Time creates pearl heart the perfect voice feather-stone, night-glow dichotomy lives in song to make mountains dance |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
mmm... just watched It's A Wonderful Life last night and I can see the correlation here.. such influence can come out of such simple things. This work is fabulous, mister! i congratulate you. remarkable insight Life is a lonely journey to, and a heavy-hearted departure from three words. I LOVE YOU |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
non-haiku response: I will take sharp edge to shell-- I'll find the key--the hidden door-- the tiny little piece of you, that opens, giving so much more... You have been too deep too long. You have yearned my twist of wrist. I have found a pearl within-- the nacre of you--loving this... tell me I can taste the sea reminder of the make of me-- whisper sweet sweet memory... a grain of sand, turns into me... love you. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (09-21-2002 02:54 AM).] |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
cultivated harvested set in silver you love you b (thanks ES) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
good ones again, Brian, glad you reposted, I missed them before even with "dichotomy" you still had room to make sense  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Very lovely.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent...love them! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Brian, this is sooooooo lovely, I could sure feel the mountains dancing reading this beside me in Colorado, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Brian, Wind in mountain trees. Her image and the moon. Dude, now I've gotta write a poem before I go to sleep. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
Virginia -- God, you are so sweet Thank you, lady Miah -- Thank you Enchantress -- I'll take that hug Thank you Noah -- you keep this place alive, young man. Thank you Mike --- you, buddy, understand write down the moon brian |
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