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SmartChick
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0 posted 2002-09-20 10:36 PM


I Am Always Thinking
~By Sue~

I sit here in this house alone
When my mind just starts to roam
Thinking about all of the past
Of how our marriage did not last

Seems like nothing is forever
Promises made were always broken
Nothing I ever did was right
Unkind words were often spoken

To trust him he wanted me to do
And just when I began to trust
Heavily he had started to drink
Then from me he just up and parted

These feelings just don't go away
My heart just keeps right on breaking
I wonder if it will ever mend
These thoughts I am always thinking

9-20-02


[This message has been edited by SmartChick (09-20-2002 10:39 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-09-20 10:48 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Sue, my heart goes out to you, I wish there was much more I could do to help, but I do know one thing: It wasn't you who had him lose trust in you, he only hurt himself and he has himself to blame, and why, I am not sure, but he just couldn't accept you and I know with all my heart eventually these tears will disappear and love will always find a way, I know it, you are so deserving of it! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are in my thoughts, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-09-20 11:01 PM


Poetess, my heart goes out to you, I know these feelings all to well..quite honestly methinks they are universal..I know this will sound a bit cliche..but time heals all wounds..I have a bandaid if you wish!? I have a whole box of them..for broken hearts..*gives you a harry potter bandaid* I know that really doesn't help but you are in my thoughts..
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3 posted 2002-09-20 11:27 PM


Good poem but very sad.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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4 posted 2002-09-23 09:41 PM


SweetSue~
I'm just gonna send you a great BIG FLORIDA HUG~
And I love FuzzyFrazzledFraggle's reply !!
*smile*
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2002-09-23 09:46 PM


Great write Sue!
you hang in there.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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6 posted 2002-09-23 09:49 PM


Like triple F says, Sue, time wounds all heels
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7 posted 2002-09-23 10:17 PM


Keep on spilling that poison right out of your system. Write and write and write, and we'll read and read and read!

Wash that man right out of your hair! Even though it hurts like hades right now, this life experience may give you the opportunity to grow and discover who you really are. You can go beyond striving to thriving!

Take Care
Linda

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