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One Southern Night
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One Southern Night |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“ONE SOUTHERN NIGHT” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Sun going down over the horizon, ocean skies aflame at sunset… Surf flowing in calm and gentle, breezes caress your silhouette … Shadows dancing on the wall, ecstasy of you in motion… Your hips sway with a beat, southern islands, calypso… Warmness of you beckons, closer embrace, we continue… Lips touch to softness of skin, senses wake to this we brew… Your hair like silk this evening, fragrance sensual to inspire… Yours I would be this night, one southern night in desire… ~~~~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ Oooooooh boyyyyyy ! This one 'cooks'~ *sighs* reverberating from the South~  This is delicious~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Bill Your words were the epitome of everything romantic and were so very much enjoyed. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Like all your poetry, there is romance, music and lots of good imagery. This is lovely...it made me sigh........... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Mmmmm...may I have one of those special drinks with the little paper umbrellas in them? This is lovely. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
....and to think I got to do a dooo-et with you! This sure is some pretty writin'!!! ~ I'm swaying to the music of your words ~ EA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill I live in southern California...does that count? It sizzles here too, like your poem. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, may she always croon jazz to your ears and make your blues coo like silk always, this is wonderful, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and ligh always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love it Bill!! May I have the same drink my sister is having?  ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh BC you rascal you! This is soooo romantic. Loving it lots. Hugs, Marti Every now and then take a good look at something not made |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a lovely piece, Bill ... beautiful imagery to set the mood of romance. Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful and romantic... I like this very much! *S* |
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