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Morgoth
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since 2001-05-21
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Baltimore, MD

0 posted 2002-09-20 05:27 PM


Searching days and nights for my Love
Lost her so long ago it seems
Cannot forget her as easily as that
When she comes to me in dreams
Now, a darkness engulfs the land
Yet always a sliver of light gleams
Keep on searching if I must
Wondering, what all this means


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bsquirrel
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-09-20 05:51 PM


Ah yes,
the headiness
of young love,
where every missed chance
means darkness has engulfed the world;
where every happenstance
equals the sum total of all before
understood and calculified
for maximum import.

Hey, thanks for the poem.

Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
Posts 972
Texas
2 posted 2002-09-25 03:38 AM


The only thing that separates those who achieve and those who don't is trying. Never give up on a love this strong. Nice write!  

Bump

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Magician
Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126

3 posted 2002-09-25 01:34 PM


Know this feeling well, and said so briefly is all the more potent.
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
4 posted 2002-09-25 01:52 PM


This feeling of love is great. Great write!!!

Cold hands means a warm heart

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