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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Our personal history writes itself pressed between the pages weathered over time. Lending character slightly frayed in tattered verses alternating between second thoughts each chapter well defined. Viewing ourselves clearly as both the heroine and the villain a hardcover neatly bound editing our life and times. Trying to grasp the meaning as a reader and writer needing to be cared for, to be accepted and understood. Pouring through an open book as one heart leads into another contemplating love; with each turn of the page, opened up; to be forgiven when writing the wrong. Still I wonder how and why the story line played out in different stages acted upon and what it's really all about. Immersed in the joy of hopes and dreams and what tomorrow may bring~ wiping away tears that sorrow fills written in our history. For all that we've lost and the battles hard fought, contemplative in the end, twisting the plot... Book marked in that time and place to read over again as the days turn into years, will he remember when he knew her then? Through his hands my pages fell leafing through the heart of me our story remains a part of me revised and written in repose....... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, ==================== to be forgiven when writing the wrong. ==================== I like the double meaning in this.  I'm sorry for all the unanswered questions. Can't say I know how to relate as it was nothing like this for me. But I do know time heals.  You always express your thoughts in such a meaningful way. It is appreciated. Peace and courage to you. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a stunning write, Lori... Its amazing how our lives can turn and twist on the smallest of decisions and how our memories often take us to some of the places which we thought we had forgotten...  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Through his hands my pages fell leafing through the heart of me our story remains a part of me revised and written in repose......." (big hugggssssss) Oh Lori, I couldn't say this any better like Lyra and Larry have, always cherish each memory written in your hearts diary and there will always be those special places and thoughts in every revise yet to explore! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-20-2002 02:15 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes..thoughtful and well written it asks many questions while stating in a large way how the author views life. I always enjoy reading your words my friend...and they most usually make me stop and think about the why as much as the what it is you are saying.... may the pages you read and write, always be of love... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh gosh, if only I could make the story flow instead of back pedaling forward faster. Thank you Larry, Lyra, Noah and Ron~ for reading through my jumbled thoughts. |
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