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SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-09-19 09:26 PM


The Blues
~By Sue~

Short nights
Long days
With no one here
I'm not okay

To sleep all day
And all night too
Sounds good to me
To not feel blue

Early to bed
Early to rise
With such sadness
I can't disguise

The pain it seems
Just wants to stay
Nothing to chase
The blues away

9-19-02



© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
1 posted 2002-09-19 09:31 PM


I would love to paint your world pink, my dear friend... but its hard to do all the way from Michigan...
Maybe you could buy some rose colored glasses, and that might make your world look a bit better.
Always please remember, that you have your poetry and you can write out your pain... and you have all of your friends here, who are pulling for you too!
I love your new pic... you look great with the fish...
~ loving hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2002-09-19 10:16 PM


Sue---I hope you're just having a bad day--
      just one bad day! I'm sending you an
      angel hug! *

Take care,
EA
    

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-09-19 10:18 PM


I hope your day gets better Sue. Nice write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2002-09-19 10:18 PM


Blue is a peaceful color, painted of a strong and vibrant woman that I consider quite bright!  Keep your chin girl.
Beautiful days ahead. ThisDiamond

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5 posted 2002-09-19 10:36 PM


Hey, you look pretty happy in that pic, Sue...and that's a nice fish!!

The crayons of life are in your hands, lady. Choose a different color...

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6 posted 2002-09-20 02:29 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Sue, my heart goes out to you, I wish there was more I could do to help but know we are all here if you need shoulders to lean upon and we help you get through these blues, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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