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Dry Bones
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Dry Bones |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
How did I get to this dark place? A promise to remain serene is muttered softly, sincere as only a child can be But the scope of my horizon is dappled with delicate impressions of destruction Waxing caverns of subtle woes, throwing shadows on the path A fearful velocity of a cascading child pouring Tears cold, draining The dreams which paint the walls of imagination with Melancholy blues and gold. A gold hue tenderly imbues my memory. A startled surmise, the glowing terms of dawn growing fine and unfettered, Freely over the shore to oversee the flourish signaling the break of emotions so undeserved. I am still loved. A heart pounded by the suddenness of tears and rush of unceasing abuse Now calms, as a profound promise distilled Surely comes back to me, deep within my soul. The sadness of storms cannot truly refract the brilliance of the sun. Filtered inspiration, spiraling Unfurls remnants of stones broken open, a parameter’s comfort That I went that way before and lived; Resilient waters waver beyond the threshold of doubt And quench the thirsting weariness of dreams unknowing Time told lets go in the cosmos, freely This luminous sea retains and Floods the journey in its entirety Awakened |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
That was amazing... Very beautiful. Kielo |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
Hmm, thanks for your "amazing" reply. That's pretty cool. However, this is a rough draft of something far better. HOPEFULLY. peace. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
manisha you cant say you arent a good poet if you can write like this!! i swear man, you have such great ideas.. and you are easily inspired.. keep it up man.. ur better than i am i admit it dont even argue u are I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you. |
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