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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-09-19 07:34 AM


We See and See

My eyes that look, see and see
Depending on the thought that be?
I see your hair, your length and bear
And with my inner eye your fair.

Most will see a common birth
But to me you are the earth.
While most will look on common wear
I will see an angel there.

You walk this world as one in many
But to me you are uncanny.
Each time I look upon your face
My beating heart goes into space.

My mind goes into weightlessness
And all of this I do confess.
I orb about your essence hour
Like a bee about a flower

You are my grail, door that’s dup
And are the content of the cup.

© Copyright 2002 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-19 08:10 AM


"You walk this world as one in many
But to me you are uncanny.
Each time I look upon your face
My beating heart goes into space."




(smiles) Awwwwww your wonderful words always get us lost in poetic space, I love it! (big hugggsssss) May you always quench your thirst with her smiles of comfort from the grail of life, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 2002-09-19 08:13 AM


Beautiful, very beautiful
Liz

Toerag
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3 posted 2002-09-19 08:15 AM


After putting on my bi-focals so I could "see" this wonderful poem, I "see" you "see" things in such a wonderful prospective....(I never put on my glasses till I leave home and get away from the mirrors...it'a an awful view from where I'm standing).....
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4 posted 2002-09-19 08:29 AM


..."And with my inner eye your fair"...

You are a man who sees the beauty within as well as the beauty without.

~ May your day be as lovely as this poem! ~
EA


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5 posted 2002-09-19 08:37 AM


Ah to see the world through your eyes, Sy!
Delicious morning read...
~Morning hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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6 posted 2002-09-19 08:38 AM



Thank you for this, Sy...

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7 posted 2002-09-19 08:39 AM


A beautiful sight Sey and lovely morning read.  Thank you m' friend.
Bill Charles
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8 posted 2002-09-19 09:05 AM


Seymour - nice read this fine morning...

BC

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-09-19 09:31 AM


Noah,
Thank you my friend.

Elizabeth,


Toe,
You need a new prescription. Thanks and have a good one.

Enchantress,
I'll take your Morning hugs and up you two more.

Sunshine,


Gentle Spirit
Thank you sweet.

Bill,
Thank you for the read.  


Earth Angel,
Thank you dear.


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10 posted 2002-09-19 09:56 AM


Ain't it wonderfulw hat one can see when they open not only their eyes, but their minds?

Well done my friend

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2002-09-19 10:11 AM


Interloper
You are right, thank you my friend.

Martie
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12 posted 2002-09-19 11:35 AM


Sy

The best part of a play, is what goes on behind the curtain.  Most of us don't look that far.  Loved this!

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2002-09-19 11:52 AM


Martie,
That's true, thank you.

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14 posted 2002-09-19 02:12 PM


Most will see a common birth
But to me you are the earth.
While most will look on common wear
I will see an angel there.

You walk this world as one in many
But to me you are uncanny.
Each time I look upon your face
My beating heart goes into space.

====================================


Now what a coincidence?!!......
the same things happen every day when I click on your name
When Randy writes heart on sleeve...
its a tender render of reprieve.

*ww*
     

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15 posted 2002-09-19 03:10 PM


Most will see a common birth
But to me you are the earth.
While most will look on common wear
I will see an angel there

Seymour - I had an appointment this morning and missed out on early reads. But this is just as beautiful with my mid-afternoon tea. Lovely. Chris  


Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

[This message has been edited by Nightshade (09-19-2002 03:11 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2002-09-19 03:17 PM


JM,
Randy has been wiping his nose on his wing
He doesn't care for long winged shirts. But if you look close you can see the writing there. And it's all about a moth. WWRS

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2002-09-19 03:20 PM


Chris,
No matter as long as you got to read it and reply. Thank you

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