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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-09-18 09:01 PM


“MUSIC ON MY MIND”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Picked up the guitar this evening,
started to play this poignant tune…
Began strumming some bluesy chords,
felt like I was loving, under the moon…

Well that’s what it does to me at times,
playing these soft sounding strings…
I close my eyes, feel the rhythms,
moving inside, deep are the feelings…

I feel like dancing to this sexy beat,
hips are swaying, feet can’t stay still…
Perhaps someone like you I could ask,
would you like to dance, hope you will…

Take my hand, and I’ll hold you close,
with my guitar and me, just grooving…
I have more than music on my mind,
hold me closer still, I’m weakening…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2002-09-18 09:04 PM


Bill

Very sensual..and sweetly seductive...but tell me..can you dance and play the guitar at the same time?  Just teasing you...this is lovely!

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2 posted 2002-09-18 09:07 PM






(sigh) Soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, keep strumming those blues as the music you always play in your words is always mesmerizingly beautiful, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-09-18 09:14 PM


Bill~You don't have to ask me twice...
Let's dance then...


Oops wrong dance....hang on....

There we go....
~Hugs~

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4 posted 2002-09-18 09:20 PM


Bill - I'll dance with you!! I think I have the "hippy hippy shakes" and "twinkle toes"....lol. I just love your romantic poems. Hip-shakin' hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-09-18 09:27 PM


Music's on my mind as well. I know whereof you speak. My guitar is a veritable extension of my soul. I love how you have created music and love with this beautiful poem.

~ movin' & groovin' 'cross the miles ~
Linda

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6 posted 2002-09-18 09:34 PM


Wooow!!

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2002-09-18 09:35 PM


Woooow!!
ShadowRider
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8 posted 2002-09-18 11:05 PM


Ya know, Bill, i don't think there will ever be a moment that i shall click onto a Bill Charles poem and be disappointed.

jeff

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