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Moonlight Romeo
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0 posted 2002-09-18 04:16 PM


Fear not, Night Star
For I, your Moon, shall return to you soon
To shine again brightly in the sky of your eyes.
Soon shall you again feel me moving across
The dark expanse of your now lonely heart,
Waxing and waning with each beat
Of sorrowful melody that flows.
The light of my beamed touch
Will press its fingers of love onto that place,
And fill it again with the brilliance
Of my love for you, my Night Star.
A brilliance, that without your light, my love,
Was forever cold and lost in the galaxy's vacuum.
Your light brought me out of that place
And showed me that I could shine again anew
For all the universes of life to see.

So again, my Night Star,
The sorrowful melody that you once knew
Now plays joyfully in our duet of the Spheres.
We fly again cross the sky on Pegasus' wings.
The Pleiades wave in envy as we fly past,
And Orion himself bows his sword to our love.
As we unite once again on that Final Horizon,
I take a meteor from the sky for your hand,
For no less a fiery jewel could grace you.
We are again nova my love, shimmering
And the shining jewel that is our love
Blazes bright still for poets and dreamers.

Once again, we now sleep, the night our home.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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1 posted 2002-09-18 04:26 PM


"As we unite once again on that Final Horizon,
I take a meteor from the sky for your hand,
For no less a fiery jewel could grace you.
We are again nova my love, shimmering
And the shining jewel that is our love
Blazes bright still for poets and dreamers.

Once again, we now sleep, the night our home"




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I sighed reading this as you always create the most beautiful romances, may your Juliet always reach to the stars with you and soar with you together on Pegasus Wings of Loves Heaven, this is spellbinding, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Romeo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-09-18 04:54 PM


"As we unite once again on that Final Horizon,
I take a meteor from the sky for your hand,
For no less a fiery jewel could grace you.
We are again nova my love, shimmering
And the shining jewel that is our love
Blazes bright still for poets and dreamers.

Once again, we now sleep, the night our home."
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Exquistely beautiful Moonlight Romeo...
Ah, if only that my name were to be Juliet.

~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

Kethry
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3 posted 2002-09-18 04:55 PM


Awesome and spectacular, a galactic write.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



the_loner_23
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4 posted 2002-09-18 05:43 PM


How beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-09-18 08:09 PM


A beautiful flight. ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2002-09-18 09:15 PM


M.Romeo - very well written. Enjoyed. Chris

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Moonlight Romeo
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7 posted 2002-09-19 10:54 AM


Thank you all very much, it's nice to see that you enjoy my work.

Thank you again.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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