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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-18 03:04 PM



My Love Belongs

you are
the silver
to my moon
at night
I fit within
your spoon
it is
your hand
I strongly hold
the breath
I breathe
so bold
taught this heart
to be a bird
listen when
I don’t say
a word
reminding me
I was never half
but whole
reaching
the depths
of my soul
the gentleness
of you
is what
I admire
the very note
which symphonies
are inspired
and if
you ever wonder
it is true
my love
belongs
to you

I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-18 03:06 PM


beautiful as usual

Cold hands means a warm heart

Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)
2 posted 2002-09-18 03:12 PM


HELEN I LOVE THE WAY YOUR WORDS PLAY ON MY MIND AS I READ THEM
THOMAS

Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
3 posted 2002-09-18 04:08 PM


Slick,  you never fail to post a treasure.
Never fail...  and this is yet another...
Nicely done Helen....

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2002-09-18 07:09 PM


...and mine heart glows with the touch of you
   from golden pot to golden pot
   boldly proclaiming for all to see -
   the arc of heavens lovely bow.


  Ah, my friend... as usual...

jwesley
  

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2002-09-18 08:29 PM


helen - I've noticed a change in your writing, it's lovelier than ever...

BC

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just out of reach
6 posted 2002-09-18 09:24 PM


Helen - I love this one!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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