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Open Poetry #22

Enamored

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

0 posted 2002-09-18 01:12 PM

Prolong me

With swoops

             Falling

I cut the chase

  to a starry careen,

   mesmerized by

O
   B
      L
         I
            V
               I
                  O
                     N

EarthenSoul
Member

since 2002-05-30

Posts 163
WA, USA

1 posted 2002-09-18 01:31 PM

Very creative. Presented nicely.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-09-18 02:12 PM

Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

3 posted 2002-09-21 02:56 AM

WWOooOOOOOoooooo!!!!!!!

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2002-09-21 12:39 PM

I liked this...especially the presentation of oblivion.

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-09-21 12:51 PM

I loved the brevity and presentation. Well done.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

6 posted 2002-09-21 03:22 PM

I am enamored by your words and style..

hrm..sorry I sound a bit cheesey today but hey blame it on the cocoa pebbles

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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