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BlueEyes
Member

since 2002-08-30

Posts 152
TX, USA

0 posted 2002-09-18 12:42 PM

The rain poured down, made me whole
Healing my heart, cleansing my soul…

I love the smell, the feel, the taste
Precious raindrops on my face…

No longer gray, my skies are blue
Washed away are the memories I held of you….

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-09-18 01:00 PM

nicely expressed...I love the feel of rain also.
*s
M

EarthenSoul
Member

since 2002-05-30

Posts 163
WA, USA

2 posted 2002-09-18 01:39 PM

The rain is the strongest soul cleanser I know. Great write!

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-09-18 02:14 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

4 posted 2002-09-18 02:50 PM

Man, that's good.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-09-19 04:28 PM

BlueEyes,
Smallsliddenbrokenness.

Just like a raindrop.

Mike

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2002-09-19 04:38 PM

Wonderful poem. Sometimes, memories are all we have left.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2002-09-19 04:52 PM

BRAVA!
I love the idea and the presentation

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2002-09-19 05:38 PM

enjoy

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2002-09-19 06:35 PM

The rain can be very soothing. Very well done poet friend.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2002-09-19 07:47 PM

Beautiful!
I'm waiting...it's supposed to rain here any minute.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

11 posted 2002-09-19 09:29 PM

Now that is something I can relate too!
I seem to be a storm chaser of sorts lately ...
see ya at the end of one of those rainbows!!!

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