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Magician
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0 posted 2002-09-18 10:01 AM


Like magic his thoughts went out to her
And wrapped around her whole
Warm she felt, as a child protected
Against the night as he tried to control
She sobbed for all that went wrong
And his thoughts turned to console
He will think of her pain
And take it all away
Replacing it with tender love
As the thoughts, like pictures play
Her mind filled with magic
In her life to create a better day


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1 posted 2002-09-18 10:05 AM



Ah, some times,

when one believes...
and believes well...
one hears the sounds
of Tinker's bell...

An excellent write...

Thomas119gold
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2 posted 2002-09-18 10:11 AM


Just a touch of magic will do its all you need to get through
BlueEyes
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3 posted 2002-09-18 10:13 AM


how beautiful.... and so "magical"....

BlueEyes

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-09-18 10:23 AM


Well done, indeed!
Write on

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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5 posted 2002-09-18 11:12 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Magician, this is soooooo beautifully compassionate, sweet friend, that is the true beauty of love and may it always bring stillness to her heart, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-09-18 11:12 AM


I do believe with that magic touch anything is possible!
~Magical smiles, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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7 posted 2002-09-18 11:21 AM


Nice job Mr. Magic...really like it.
J

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8 posted 2002-09-18 12:13 PM


Very well done. Enjoyed the read.
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