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Thistle Dance |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Thistle Dance ambrosia of need I am but a common weed bold bittersweet plant with touch that can enchant come here let me lure reach for me I am your cure you are drawn to me you cannot deny no reason for you to question why I draw you in closer to this trance by the night we thistle dance once the place where roses schemed I lay in the garden of your dreams I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is just beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Lovely imagery here, Helen... beautifully written.  ~ chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - words you write are like a rose in the mornings due... BC |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nice, thistles have beauty also, So do many ‘weeds’ I remember as a child Picking bouquets of Dandelions They always made my mother smile Gloom |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Helen, This reminds me of my first poem for Adult, The rain in the thistle. (go find it  )Mikey |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Simply beautiful. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
If you get any better I will have to stop writing so I won't be embarrassed  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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