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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-09-17 11:00 PM

Guide  me

River of peace
   my eyes sailing
through empty streets

Dreams    golden nights
   paintings of paris--
I have walked this land

My hands like water

clouds falling through
   blackness

In silence    still --
  ocean blue --
sunsets -  jewels of      lonely skies

Edge walking      in thoughts  my own
I claim  all   however painful, powerful,
                  truthful
manner of grace   long forgotten ticks

    Clocks  bleed    time
each fall   each echo

our lips hushed

    voices beyond control
seperated    love   and do we   hate?

can I be   so human   to remember your breath

cold     worn   on shoulders    eight walking,
among    paths of lost worlds
with no canopys   no shelter

I  just a shell,
     broken wings,
a prayer  in unwanted travel

I let you die  in my mind; in my heart
sweet abondonment   of any rising sun

cry now

your graceful birds
    are looking down upon earth
with raven eyes

can I ever understand

I have been found

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-09-17 11:04 PM

Hi Lauren, yes, I think you will be found.

Beautiful words and good to see you again...

Barry

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-09-17 11:05 PM

"I let you die  in my mind; in my heart
sweet abondonment   of any rising sun

cry now

your graceful birds
    are looking down upon earth
with raven eyes

can I ever understand

I have been found"

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Lauren, this is so beautifully sad, sweet friend, your wonderful poems are always such beautiful works of art and fill these pages like galleries of art! (kiss on cheek) Here, you are always found and are special to us all, God Bless You, yay, now may your heart always light like Paris at Christmastide, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-09-17 11:06 PM

I let you die  in my mind; in my heart
sweet abondonment   of any rising sun

cry now

your graceful birds
    are looking down upon earth
with raven eyes

can I ever understand

I have been found
-------------------------------------------
Lauren~Your writing...your expression is just so incredible..I am left speechless.
This is amazing!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-09-17 11:32 PM

It seems that you have been found, Lauren...
and your poem is awesome...
I really enjoyed it.

~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-09-17 11:33 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-09-17 11:40 PM

Greeneyes - I'd love to be read this touching poem in soft whispers...

BC

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

7 posted 2002-09-18 12:44 PM

one of the best poems I will be reading this day... enjoyed much.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2002-09-18 06:03 AM

Lauren dear friend...your words have been missed.....and still they whisper across the page. Beautiful. Missed you and love you too dear

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

9 posted 2002-09-18 08:17 AM

I remember those days, lost among the colors.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

10 posted 2002-09-19 12:35 PM

you have been found, and i'm glad i was one of those to find this.

quote:
can I be so human to remember your breath

so simple a line, yet again, so strong. to be able to say so much in so little is a talent indeed. breathing as usual.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2002-09-19 01:23 AM

I let you die  in my mind; in my heart
sweet abondonment   of any rising sun

Your reach so far to a place of reckon,
and always you touch and lay your words down so smoothly.

  Oh Lauren, I so loved this picture of your Paris........

hugging you~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2002-09-19 02:51 AM

Enjoyed...James

texasrose
Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 146

13 posted 2002-09-19 06:16 AM

beautiful!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

14 posted 2002-09-19 11:05 AM

A poetic painting of wistful whisperings...

~ l-o-v-e-l-y ~
EA

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

15 posted 2002-09-22 11:28 PM

in a small corner of a museum somewhere. . . there is a portrait. . . of the poet. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
Member

since 2002-09-20

Posts 155
Fraggle Rock

16 posted 2002-09-23 12:00 PM

I must agree most definately beautiful!! I'm glad I read

Consider yourself fuzzed

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