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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-09-17 11:00 PM

I kneel before my lord, my king
in worship of this realm I know.
I'll shed a tear as lashes sting
from each lash shredding of the blow.

I took to heart that which I shant.
I took to hand warm feel of skin.
I leave behind one love I can’t
as now I tell my thousand sins.

My heart I gave to her, our queen
upon the day of christening.
My soul didst leave in sight unseen
of eyes most bright and glistening.

Take now my flesh to lie the rack
and twist the hemp till cries then still
Tend not deep wounds of bleeding back
as now hot pain doth come at will.

And though my earth shall soon become
a place of rest for this my soul.
My heart wilt beat in lover’s strum
till one last breath does slowly roll.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-09-17 11:09 PM

(sigh) Wow, this poem reminded me of the band Creed's new hit "One Last Breath" reading it, yes, the Lord has a plan for all of us I surely believe and only He will lead you to all the answers of your desires! (big hugggsssssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-17-2002 11:09 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-09-17 11:09 PM

Ah Barry!! The images this conjures up in my mind!
This just aches! Wonderful write!
..and now to sleep, perchance to dream.
~Nite hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-09-17 11:10 PM

Magnus darling man yet again from within your pen a glittering precious gem appears. Each verse bathes the readers mind in the sorrowful picture, each syllable flows with wonder into the next. The flow is a dream, and the content is as always utterly beautiful. YOU know I adore this, the construction is perfect darling heart. You are, as always are a master of these knightly tales and I applaud your skill. I laud your ability to write so truthfully so picturesquely, but most of all I stand in awe by the way you write sooooooooo beautifully and manage to compress such wonder into so few words.

Truly awesome writing and I love it utterly utterly utterly love it. I love it when you write like this, you really do excel.

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-09-17 11:20 PM

Barry~

Sir, you really are amazing....I love when you write in this style...its all yours....HUGSSs

Lauren~

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

5 posted 2002-09-17 11:50 PM

Barry...Beautiful words...Paul
Our lord is an all forgiving lord and will forgive all sins when we kneel before him.

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

6 posted 2002-09-18 12:43 PM

very painfully deep and so well written..yes a 'golden glitter pen" as Marsha said.what wonderful things flow from your heart thru it...
God blees you much, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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