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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-09-17 07:42 PM

“DANCING WITH HER”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Last evening I danced with a stranger,
to guitars strumming through the night…
Held her close, felt all of her warmth,
under the stars in the pale moonlight…

My hands on her hips, as I held her close,
swaying in motion to a southern beat…
Delicate it was holding her just right,
her breath on my neck, feeling complete…

Told me her name, whispered it in my ear,
already knew though, was in my dreams…
Want more than just dancing with her,
somewhere in the south, under moonbeams…
~~~~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-09-17 07:45 PM

'neath the blue moon, 'mong the streams
he waltzed the waltz, danced his dreams
smell of lilac, honeysuckle, too
seems to me this dream had a view...

Enjoyed, Bill, very much...thank you!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2002-09-17 07:54 PM

Bill~
This is lovely as usual, my friend.
I always enjoy your romantic words and thoughts.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

3 posted 2002-09-17 08:07 PM

Bill...Very nice. Watch that moon, it will do the trick every time...Paul

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

4 posted 2002-09-17 08:14 PM

Hey, you are getting good at this.
Enjoyed.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-09-17 08:30 PM

BillCharles~
Just lovely ... now put away the dream ...
and reach out ... she's right there~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-09-17 08:35 PM

Oooooh Yeeeeesssss!!!!

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2002-09-17 08:59 PM

Yeah! Lets hear it for dancing with stranges somewhere in the south, under moon beams....oops - wife boxed my ears just then!

Great write Bill...hope she gives dances with you forever...

jwesley

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2002-09-17 09:02 PM

As always the picture paints itself in your write. ThisDiamond

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

9 posted 2002-09-17 09:04 PM

sigh! A finely woven piece of romance, Bill....
Oh how you make me feel like dancing.

~ dancing chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-09-17 09:45 PM

(smiles) Oh Bill, I knew it, this is the sequel to "Dancing With The Stranger", oh boy, then what happens? (big hugggsssss) Such romance fills your bluesy heart, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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