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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-09-17 07:31 PM




Ten years ago today
I held you in my arms
I was captivated by your being
As I surrendered to your charms

My baby girl Elysa
Was an angel in disguise
I fell in love so easily
As I gazed into her eyes

With a smile so infectious
And a warmth to rival the sun
To me you are so special
Even tho you're my only one

I wanted to have more children
But it just wasn't meant to be
'tho we make a special team
This family of three

Over the years so much has happened
As I've watched you bloom and grow
You mean more to me than anything
I just wanted you to know

18 September 2002


Coco & Woofa, Elysa's pets

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-09-17 07:48 PM



A happy family, indeed...and a lovely poem to go with a charming young lady...

Miah
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2 posted 2002-09-17 07:55 PM




This is so lovely, what a sweet tribute to your daughter.   and happy birthday to her.

A. L. Becker
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3 posted 2002-09-17 07:58 PM


i remember my tenth birthday.  that was a great age to be.  best wishes for your little one!
Annie

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

Paul Wilson
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4 posted 2002-09-17 08:02 PM


Sue~ A lovely poem for your daughter Elysa.
Wish her a HAPPY BIRTHDAY from me...Paul

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-09-17 08:05 PM


Oh what a beautiful birthday tribute, Sue...
It looks from the picture, that your little beauty shares your passion for the outdoors...
Please wish her a Happy Birthday from me.
My grandaughter, Dasha will turn 10 on November 1.
~ birthday hugs to both you and Elysa

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

fishop
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6 posted 2002-09-17 08:05 PM


Sweet as can be.  
Bill Charles
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7 posted 2002-09-17 08:05 PM


Suetang - they sure grow quickly, me wonders where the time has gone to. Lovely write...

BC

NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2002-09-17 08:16 PM




Happy 10th Birthday Elysa!!!

Know what's the very best thing about having a Mom who writes poems for you? People from all over the world are going to be wishing you a Happy Birthday. Now how special is that?

I like your Coco and Woofa.

Birthday Greetings from Marti in Boston, MA, USA


Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

jwesley
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9 posted 2002-09-17 08:56 PM


They are so wonderful aren't they... such joyfulness given us. And I feel the love you have my friend.... my heart embraces you both....

and  HAPPY BIRTHDAY ELYSA!!! from all you friends at my house...

me...terri...lisa brooke ...justin shane...Dawg (chelsie) all the birds and whatever other critter we may have today.... they come and go...

jwesley

[This message has been edited by jwesley (09-17-2002 08:57 PM).]

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10 posted 2002-09-17 09:27 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, as always you write such heartwarming dedications and I know your little Elysa will love this so much and cherish this always as she is having you as a loving mother! (kiss on cheek) You truly are an angel, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-17-2002 09:27 PM).]

Magnus
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11 posted 2002-09-17 10:15 PM


Happy Birthday young lady...and may you have
many more with your Mom in tow,  beaming as
she surely is...

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2002-09-17 10:49 PM


Lucky Mom...lucky daughter...Happy birthday...James
passing shadows
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13 posted 2002-09-17 10:57 PM


aw Sue, she's beautiful! I know the feeling, I have one 10 and one 14...it's hard to believe that time goes by so fast.
Suetang
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14 posted 2002-09-18 02:50 AM


Thank you one and all on behalf of Elysa for your heartfelt wishes on her 10th Birthday.  They are so very much appreciated.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

BlueEyes
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15 posted 2002-09-18 10:11 AM


Happy, Happy Birthday to Elysa!!

And great poem, mom!


BlueEyes

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16 posted 2002-09-18 12:01 PM


Sue:  Happy birthday to Elysa!  Hope it's a wonderful time for her and for you.  she's lovely and her pets are pretty too!

Betty Lou Hebert

Toerag
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17 posted 2002-09-18 12:05 PM


Very well done...and I can relate!!!
TradingSpaces19
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18 posted 2002-09-18 06:21 PM


this is a good poem, thank you for sharing. Happy Birthday Elysa!!!!

Love,
Andrea
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