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smitty-j
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0 posted 2002-09-17 04:13 PM



I hear his voice it calls to me
Whenever I’m alone.
Its gentle tones caress my skin
With words he makes love known.
I feel his breath warm on my skin
Soft breeze on summer days
All words left unspoken now
More shown in deeper ways.
I see his face in dreams and wake
And long to touch his cheek.
To see in eyes reflected love
For more we’ll always seek.
I taste his kiss, its surely there
So soft and yet shows need.
We give and take, how it should be
On each others love we feed.
I feel his touch brush over me
And ache for more to come.
Our time will be and then we’ll need
The touch of only one.

Julie

© Copyright 2002 Julie - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-09-17 04:14 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

BlueEyes
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since 2002-08-30
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2 posted 2002-09-17 04:17 PM


smitty-j...
I must say - for having written your first poem only a month ago, you are definitely off to a great start.
Very good writing...

BlueEyes

smitty-j
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since 2002-09-13
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3 posted 2002-09-17 04:59 PM


Thanks so much...glad you liked it
J

Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2002-09-17 06:00 PM


This is so very nice. Tender and wistful and warm, I like it.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

Magician
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5 posted 2002-09-17 06:02 PM


This leaves the reader breathless, as much as the one for whom its intended. Excellent.
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just out of reach
6 posted 2002-09-17 06:39 PM


Very soft and sensuous. Chris

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Bill Charles
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7 posted 2002-09-17 08:27 PM


smitty-j - seems that you have 'the touch of only one', and it show in this very romantic write...

BC

jwesley
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8 posted 2002-09-17 08:35 PM


definitely seeing your romantic side here, my friend... ejoyed..

jwesley

fishop
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since 2002-09-13
Posts 79
ohio
9 posted 2002-09-17 09:12 PM


I thought this was very sweet. And I too feel a certain attraction to your work. You know what they say about great minds....lol.


All words left unspoken now
More shown in deeper ways.


I read your poem and re's: in the critical place and believe I may have what you desire. Fishop@aol.com  

admirer
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10 posted 2002-09-18 08:24 AM


a month well spent...excellent

[This message has been edited by admirer (09-18-2002 08:55 AM).]

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