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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-09-17 03:35 PM



I orbit your life
moving closer then farther
you never reach out
you’ll never have kissed my lips
you’ll never know what you missed



Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (09-17-2002 03:36 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-09-17 03:36 PM


Whoa!!! This is good

Cold hands means a warm heart

Nightshade
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just out of reach
2 posted 2002-09-17 03:39 PM


You do this soooooo well..sigh..Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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3 posted 2002-09-17 03:40 PM




(big hugggssss) This is so deeply heartfelt, sweet friend, I know this feeling and hope now you have true love that surrounds your heart with warmth in destinies heliocentric theory, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

smitty-j
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4 posted 2002-09-17 03:42 PM


I think I'd turn in that orbit and make a grab at ya...woohoo
J

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5 posted 2002-09-17 03:43 PM


Wow...now that will make some girl think "what did i miss out on?"

cool

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-09-17 03:45 PM


Next orbit by Canada....I'll reach out!
Excellent!!
Nobody does it better....
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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7 posted 2002-09-17 04:03 PM


Bob darling man and again you leave me with nothing to say, except this is one of your best. You can orbit me anytime darling heart. Truly this is perfect and this I shall be taking with me. This is utterly utterly special

I love it love it love it utterly, the tall Texan is on a roll today, this is a first class piece, and did I mention I love it? Mmmmmm I do

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

sean_krazy
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8 posted 2002-09-17 04:18 PM


well i cant say enough other than that it was a good one...

peace

sean (sean_krazy)

BlueEyes
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9 posted 2002-09-17 04:21 PM


beautiful....

BlueEyes

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2002-09-17 08:21 PM



You could make Haley's comet sound romantic,
but you knew that!

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
11 posted 2002-09-17 08:24 PM


Interloper - grab the ring, and perhaps she will also....

BC

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12 posted 2002-09-17 08:26 PM


InterLoper~

In a real tail-spin
Reaching out - all directions
Where is your orbit ?
A light-world away from mine ?
Oh ... when galaxies collide~


*HaleyHugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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jwesley
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13 posted 2002-09-17 08:38 PM


...never thought of it as orbiting (more like crashing and burning...ha!), but like the way you put it and enjoyed this...

jwesley

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14 posted 2002-09-17 09:11 PM


What an orbit it would be......
like a shooting star across the sky
a twinkling blush within my eye
just one kiss, no not enough
I love it when you write this stuff!!

sorry......couldn't help myself.....first
time my muse has even thought of letting me think of a few words......lol.....
lol at Jimmy too....crash and burn.....been there a FEW times........
awesome write Tex!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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15 posted 2002-09-17 11:43 PM


very lovely.....and yet somewhat sad....


Lauren~

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

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