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CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-09-17 02:02 PM







Gently, softly.....
Lulled into peaceful dreams
Lightly wafting loves sweet schemes
As a feather flits upon silken breeze
Passion's night, sweet memories

Tender kisses......
Lips melded in desire
lighting hearts and souls on fire
fully ripe, and velvet to touch
receives the love she wants so much

Love awaits….
He wants to take her there
with passions strong and love so fair
Abandoned now to his embraces
Satiated secret places

Awakenings…..
The dawning of first light
Fearing so her lover's flight
Upon her pillow.. one red rose
To remind her of the love she knows



Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-17 02:58 PM


Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
2 posted 2002-09-17 03:03 PM


Sigh. Lovely images.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2002-09-17 03:17 PM


Exsquite! ThisDiamond
ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
4 posted 2002-09-17 03:20 PM


This outdoes me.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

sean_krazy
Junior Member
since 2002-09-14
Posts 33

5 posted 2002-09-17 04:22 PM


i dont knwo what to say...probably wow??

sean (sean_krazy)

CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
Posts 845
Island in Paradise
6 posted 2002-09-18 12:35 PM


the loner: hello and thanks for your time

pilgrimage:Nan thanks for that sigh I think it means I did succeed..smiles

this Diamond:thanks for being a gem and commenting on this...

Thudermage; naw..our poetry is just all different like flowers amking up the whole garden..thanks so much!

Sean:
well me either I sit for hours sometimes to make  my muse write..I appreciate your time and stopping by ti give me a shout
aloha and hugs to all, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2002-09-19 02:07 AM


Beautiful Cher...I recently got into a little trouble for not giving a friend of mine a rose...she was a little hurt...James
CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
Posts 845
Island in Paradise
8 posted 2002-09-19 03:32 AM


James: Don't forget those romantic touches like roses..we wahines do like that much!
thanks for the read, comments and aloha,
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
9 posted 2002-09-19 09:08 AM


CSKpoet - I do love roses, especially to see her face when they are presented to her...

BC

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
10 posted 2002-09-19 09:18 AM


Beautiful write Cher!
Much enjoyed this treasure.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
11 posted 2002-09-19 09:25 AM


Oh now you know I love this. Should be white though j/k It's beautiful Cher.
CSKpoet
Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845
Island in Paradise
12 posted 2002-09-19 03:14 PM


Bill:  ah i would expect you to be a romantic rose giver thanks for the kind words

Enchantress: Thanks Nancy Lee, you are always such a smile maker and an encouraging lady with a kind comment.

White Rose: well....you are just a special rose! thanks for always being there with your sweet and kind comments

hugs to all, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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