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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-09-17 01:36 PM



There is no need for outerwear
A stimulus to rush me there
The world inside my life revolves
A galaxy where love resolves

A mind at rest to settle down
A soul in liquid light to drown
The wings inside to warmly fold
A milky way in aura bold

There is no need to compliment
A heart so free in deep content
The wild inside to fuel full on
A star to guide my dreams upon

A mirror graced and clear as glass
A breeze displaced in timeless pass
The wonder God has given me
A universe where I am free

Copyright Kkh 9/17/02

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (09-17-2002 03:15 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-17 02:07 PM


First one to respond...wonderful rhymes, and very thought provoking images and unique wording.
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-09-17 02:59 PM


I like the rythmes too

Cold hands means a warm heart

Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2002-09-17 03:06 PM


What a happy poem. I like it.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

BlueEyes
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4 posted 2002-09-17 05:41 PM


how beautiful...

BlueEyes

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-09-17 07:29 PM


Lovely images here, Kathy...
Beautifully written.
~ chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2002-09-17 07:59 PM


ThisDiamond - very nice uplifting poem. Nice to be free, eh?

BC

jwesley
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7 posted 2002-09-17 09:09 PM


Very well stated... a place where I want to be too... Enjoyed this much...

jwesley

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8 posted 2002-09-17 10:18 PM


Kathy,

This is a poem which tells of freedom, of
an inner self that is at one with all that
surrounds....

Beautiful words dear lady...

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2002-09-17 11:23 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Yes, and we all have the freedom in our hearts and we are free to share it with all the world! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
10 posted 2002-09-18 08:44 AM


For all my friends:

Through my poetry I have discovered the freedom that I have always sought.
I am proud to humbly share that with all of you...the inspiration and encouragement to blossom me. ThisDiamond

Martie
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11 posted 2002-09-18 01:22 PM


ThisDiamond

Wonderful and uplifting spirit filled poem!!!

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