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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-17 12:22 PM



Held In Hush


you show
me stars
and never
once remind
me how
far away
they are
and when
my dreams
seem like
total eclipse
a heavenly
body brushes
my lips
at times
my mind
runs too fast
seems I
am all
in a rush
you are
my place
of calm
there and
only there
my heart
is held
in hush

I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-09-17 12:30 PM


held in hush... such a wondeful place for a heart to be held...

very tender.. very tender indeed

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-09-17 12:34 PM


heart tenderly held
this quiet place in my soul
accepts your sweet love

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-09-17 02:53 PM


This is just beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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just out of reach
4 posted 2002-09-17 03:41 PM


Lovely once again Helen. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

sean_krazy
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5 posted 2002-09-17 04:20 PM


aww...this is such a good poem...damn..i feel my poems aren't as good when i read every one elses ((.

i wish i had a gurl with whom i could put close to my heart and all the sounds go hush

later
sean (sean_krazy)

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2002-09-17 07:52 PM


helen - hush is lovely whispers...

BC

jwesley
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7 posted 2002-09-17 09:33 PM


Ah Slick... you never cease to amaze...

jwesley

admirer
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8 posted 2002-09-18 08:51 AM


lovely
Honeybee
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9 posted 2002-09-18 04:46 PM



Oh, I love this...it's a keeper~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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