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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-09-17 10:19 AM


A warm heart holds faith
trusting all tribulations
shall pass in a while
~*~
mixing heart and soul
blending faith, hope, and courage,
with sincerity
~*~
A belief in Him
giving over all burdens
in full confidence
~*~
His promises made
one must accept all in faith
letting burdens go
~*~
then walking onward
letting God lead on in life
a heart, unburdened

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-17 10:21 AM


My friend.... indeed your path is clear in this one...

nicely said

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2 posted 2002-09-17 10:31 AM



Amen, dear Interloper, amen.

EA

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3 posted 2002-09-17 10:53 AM



Your special Muse is a very fortunate person to have you know him/her so very well to know what is most important is something that can truly be shared with all...

you do your muse great credit, and your muse...I am sure...is smiling...

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4 posted 2002-09-17 11:01 AM


InterLoper~
Every thought that you maintain is shared in sincerity~
This is quite, quite lovely my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2002-09-17 11:03 AM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I truly believe He is the muse of so many as He is mine and with His great grace we are all blessed by the light of life! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-17-2002 11:04 AM).]

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6 posted 2002-09-17 11:37 AM


Extremely well done Interloper!
~Heart-hugs, Nancy Lee~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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7 posted 2002-09-17 11:40 AM


extremely beautiful write Interloper.  Wonderful muse, wonderful writing.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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8 posted 2002-09-17 11:42 AM


Bob darling man yet again from within your pen a glittering precious gem appears. Each verse bathes the readers mind in truth, each syllable flows with wonder into the next. The flow is a dream, and the content is as always utterly beautiful. YOU know I adore this, the construction is perfect darling heart, I so wish I had the discipline to write these wonders but you know I am much too talkative to be able to do these with any degree of competence. You however as always are a master of them and I applaud your skill, I laud your ability to write briefly, but most of all I stand in awe by the way you write sooooooooo beautifully and manage to compress such wonder into so few words.

Truly awesome writing and I love it utterly utterly utterly love it  


Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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9 posted 2002-09-17 06:17 PM



Interloper~
Amen, my friend.
This is lovely and filled with beauty and truth.
Thank you for sharing this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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10 posted 2002-09-17 06:27 PM


Beautiful dear Interloper. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-09-17 07:11 PM


A very special muse indeed, Interloper and a very special tribute as well.
~ chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

vandana
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12 posted 2002-09-17 07:24 PM


enjoyed
Paul Wilson
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13 posted 2002-09-18 03:19 AM


Interloper...Your words of wisdom ring so true. Enjoyed very much...Paul
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14 posted 2002-09-18 06:20 PM


yes, your most extra special muse...and yet He is there for each of us to tap into, isn't it awesome!


well done! BRAVO!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Martie
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15 posted 2002-09-18 06:24 PM


Beautifully done, Interloper!
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16 posted 2002-09-19 02:30 AM


Lovely...James
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