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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-09-17 09:25 AM

His Thoughts

wrapped in robes
fair silk opaque
the light of you
shines even on
darkest night
to guide my hands
and heart
so that
I
fondly find
the center
unwrapping
what you share

Her Thoughts

slipping out
layered by
disabling memories
feeling the boundaries
of your touch
as we meet
in solitary hold
drifting off
into blueprints
familiar

His Thoughts

It would in time
be that I forget
what in moonlight
my eyes did glance
with greed upon
but the words
painted hues
of you
will eternity
remain

Her Thoughts

Tattooed
by reality's touch
I cruise the night
in moonlight temptation
innocense
turned back in time,
your voice
soft as the night air,
sweet as the morning dew,
bridging my days with
transparent
happiness

Cpat/Maureen

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (09-17-2002 09:41 AM).]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-09-17 09:48 AM

The thoughts blend...a good combination...

Thanks!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-09-17 09:52 AM

Bravo! This was so lovely how you presented these words of love as, "His Thoughts" and "Her Thoughts". It was so intimate.

~ smiles ~
Linda

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-09-17 09:55 AM

thank you Karilea and Linda...just returning some word play from yesterday under a poem of mine.

Hugss
M

Professor Gloom
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of Depression

4 posted 2002-09-17 09:59 AM

An excellent word play,
Blending a conversation with emotions

Well done

Gloom

Cpat Hair

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5 posted 2002-09-17 10:01 AM

Morning.... As usual..you show your talent for weaving words. Very nicely done my friend..very nice indeed.

The he said, she said...context does make it seem so like a conversation and a glimpse inside the thoughts..that it easily read and related to...

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-09-17 10:04 AM

You know me...full of conversation(that is, when I have a voice) and definitely emotional

having trouble typing this morning...my new neighbors puppy lab got loose, ran for me and as I grabbed her collar. She twisted along with my hand...definitely slowing me down for this weekends needs.
No voice, one handed ..what's next???
M

oh and thanks for the response

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-09-17 10:06 AM

thanks C...it's always a pleasure to be inspired, and more so by your words.

~softly smiling still
M

Cpat Hair

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8 posted 2002-09-17 10:20 AM

Of morning's light
there is a part that
though not seperated from the rest
is missing when words go unshared
leaving the shadows
perhaps
a bit darker
than when they are.

Soft smiles indeed
play the lines of light

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

9 posted 2002-09-17 10:25 AM

I love it!
1derful!
HOORAY!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

10 posted 2002-09-17 10:38 AM

Of morning's light
there is a part that
though not seperated from the rest
is missing when words go unshared
leaving the shadows
perhaps
a bit darker
than when they are.

Soft smiles indeed
play the lines of light
.......

untitled, my words
seep from within
filling the void
with velvet thoughts
chancing a softsmile
gifted
to embrace
between the lines

M

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

11 posted 2002-09-17 10:40 AM

And Interloper...I have not forgotten you
a hug and a thanks for reading us.

M

Midnitesun

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Gaia

12 posted 2002-09-17 11:18 AM

This, and the replies, are the heart and soul of poetry. Thank you for sharing this intimate look at your beautiful souls.

Marsha

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Maidstone Kent England

13 posted 2002-09-17 11:50 AM

Maureen darling heart, when you and Cpt combine you make an awesome team. The interplay between the two is utterly utterly beautiful, definitely a conversation between he and she. You know I love it don’t you? Or course I do. Do I have to rhapsodise over the flow of soul between the two? Do I have to say that the tempo and the rhythm are perfect? I doubt it since you know they are.

Not long now darling heart

PiPITIS is happening soon and I can barely wait

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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