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RSWells
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0 posted 2002-09-17 09:16 AM



My misfortune was to have unwittingly
idled too long under the "sale" sign
on the day you chose for shopping.

Merely resting I lingered imagining
myself an old lion who yet had teeth.
Carnivore seducer who in macho naivete

was ignorant the Latin words "Dens Leonis"
or lions teeth had moved through French as
dent-de-lion on its way to dandelion.

And while you were an excellent
meal it was I who was plucked.

For a time you found me a pleasure
and all my parts useful, flower,
leaf and root. I shone and flour-
ished in your favored light

and withered quite completely
in the stirring of the tarot
shuffling that must have turned
me up an ephemeral pestilential
weed.

"Happy people have no history" - French Proverb

© Copyright 2002 Richard S. Wells jr. - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-09-17 09:39 AM


what a wonderful poem Richard..I had to read it and show you this in case you weren't here back then

Dent de Lion

There you were, golden maned
popping up everywhere I looked
as I leaned back yesterday,
enjoying the warmth of an after rain.

Drawing me to you, I plucked you
from the meadows behind
brushed you lightly against my cheek
surprised at your softness,
and how delicate you really were.

All my life you were but a weed
though cosmopolitan, and to some
an herb, producing a dandy wine
to drink or as is, edible to feast upon.

I eyed you, held you, played with you
studied your strong stem
your little hairs, fine tuned
breathed in scent of sweetness.

Why was I so surprised...
sensing your want of acceptance?
Yesterday, you received mine.
I kissed you with my lips and you
left your tracings of gold upon them.

A weed no more, I see the beauty in you

M
April 2000

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-09-17 09:52 AM


RSWells
Your fishing with symbles bait has already hooked you a fish. I hope she is eatable. LOL
Enjoyed.

RSWells
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3 posted 2002-09-17 10:50 AM


Maureen, It was before my time here and a lovely poem it is. Lucky he that inspired it.
Seymour, A hasty laugh indeed. Thanks for the read.

bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-09-17 01:42 PM


RSWells,
I drank this in,
like lion's teeth wine.

Mike

Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2002-09-17 03:01 PM


What a neat progression! I love it.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

Sunshine
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6 posted 2002-09-17 07:50 PM



Well now, I have written of this dandiest of lions myself...I shall have to rescue it from the archives, but I fear it is not quite what you've done to this, m'friend...

well done!

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