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Open Poetry #22

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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-09-17 12:38 PM

Safe!
Enjoy relief
Perhaps this truth will
Appease
Ridiculous notions of
Amorous charms
Targeting you, oh
Endangered one...
~Tier
9/02

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."
[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (09-17-2002 12:39 AM).]

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2002-09-17 01:01 AM

I really enjoyed this.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-09-17 08:55 AM

I think it is so clever how you do this sort of poem. Very clever!

~ smiles ~
Linda

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2002-09-17 10:28 AM

ah..indeed your talent is showing!!!

nicely done my friend.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-09-17 10:39 AM

How 1derful!
You gotta be careful targeting those endangered species ... you may get in trouble

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

5 posted 2002-09-17 12:03 PM

Very interesting piece,T.
I enjoyed it very much!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-09-17 12:04 PM

Tier,
Your use of "endangered"
changes this poem from longing
to warning.

I loved it!
(and I will try and work
on our e-mail duet today,
if I have the time --
I also have to write Lori a story.
Sheesh to me.

)

Mikey

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2002-09-17 04:19 PM

Thanks everyone!

and Mikey, first things first! do the story!

*hugs*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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